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小作文：Map

　　大作文：More people nowadays are living longer after they retire from work. It may cause some individual and social problems. What are these problems? What can be done to solve them?

　　朗阁讲师点评

　　1.本次考试难度不大。

　　2.整体分析：

　　Task 1：动态变迁地图题：学校的布局

　　注意：1.地理变迁图属于常规考题2. 注意时态以及语态(多选择被动)的使用;3.先后地理位置的顺序;适当用到定语以及分词表达。

　　相关表达：(注意时态由图片时间决定)

　　1.. A 在B 的东方/西方/南方/北方

　　A is/ lies/ is located/ is situated in/on / to the east/west/south/north of B

　　(in 表A 在B 内部， ON 表A 和B接壤，TO 表A 和B 分开)

　　2.A 在B 内部的某个部位

　　A is in the eastern/ southern/ western/ northern part of B.

　　3.A 在B 的对面

　　A is on the opposite side of B

　　A is opposite B

　　Task 2社会类话题，难度不大。

　　题目翻译：退休之后人们寿命延长。这也许会造成一些个人和社会问题。是些什么问题?如何解决这些问题?

　　分析点评：今天的雅思写作task2，属于雅思写作常考话题，关于老龄化带来的利弊和应对措施需要考生特别关注。

　　从话题上来说，今天的作文题属于社会类话题，对于考生来说不难想出观点。

　　从类型上来说，属于问题解决类，此类型的题目要避免漏题，可以按问题分段。

　　参考写法：

　　*段：话题背景+个人观点

　　第二段：退休之后人们寿命的延长所带来的问题

　　第三段：解决办法

　　第四段：重申个人观点

　　题目思路：

　　主体段1：As more people nowadays are living longer after they retire from work, there is more possibility for modern societies to be under an enormous financial burden on health care. This is mainly because a significant investment of medical resources is required once the elderly suffer from diseases. The number of people needing long-term medical care and medicines in their old age will increase, which will put stress on available facilities giving this care. In fact, the government is responsibility for the provision of health care. Moreover, with the increasing number of people living longer after retirement, the government would under pressure to provide more pensions and improve the social security system. It would require employees to increase their pension contributions as the state will have a tremendous shortfall in funding for pensions.

　　主体段2:There may be some measures to tackle these problems. A gradual increase of the pension age is considered as a feasible solution in some countries. In addition, governments can adopt policies to encourage the influx of migrants in order to solve the problems brought by the aging population.

　　考试建议

　　1.小作文：重点关注基础数据图。

　　2.大作文：重点关注科技、环境、社会类话题。

　　3.重点浏览2019-2021年写作机经，雅思写作还会大量重复原题，可借助《*范文书》第8版经典旧题来复习。